The Story Of My Relationship
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The Story Of My Relationship
Lol This is kind of based on mine, so...Just keep that in mind.
Chapter One
"Reyn's going to break up with her. He doesn't even like her." The words entered my head easily, and I smiled with joy. Yay! They were going to break up!
Don't worry, I'm not cruel at all. Reyn's current girlfriend, Abby, doesn't like him. She likes Alex. She's just trying to get him jealous, you see. And apparently Reyn doesn't like Abby and is going to dump him.
My name's Julie, and I think I'm falling in love with Reyn. He's the guy I have been thinking about all day. All my friends tease me about him. I screamed out the window, "I WANT TO BE MRS. JULIE GOYA!" out the window yesterday on a dare. I felt so free then.
I have decided that I will tell Reyn I like him in this really romantic way. This is my first time telling a guy I like him, and I hope it will end well.
After Reyn and Abby break up, I'll find an excuse to hug him. During that hug, I will whisper in his ear, "Reyn...I like you." Taking a step away, I'll grin, wave, and say, "Bye!" like nothing happened. Then I'll skip off home with butterflies in my stomach, hopeful thoughts.
But...I still don't know if he likes me. Which is why this is so exciting. I like to be out there. I love to take risks. But...Is this too big of a risk? The risk of my pride?
Chapter One
"Reyn's going to break up with her. He doesn't even like her." The words entered my head easily, and I smiled with joy. Yay! They were going to break up!
Don't worry, I'm not cruel at all. Reyn's current girlfriend, Abby, doesn't like him. She likes Alex. She's just trying to get him jealous, you see. And apparently Reyn doesn't like Abby and is going to dump him.
My name's Julie, and I think I'm falling in love with Reyn. He's the guy I have been thinking about all day. All my friends tease me about him. I screamed out the window, "I WANT TO BE MRS. JULIE GOYA!" out the window yesterday on a dare. I felt so free then.
I have decided that I will tell Reyn I like him in this really romantic way. This is my first time telling a guy I like him, and I hope it will end well.
After Reyn and Abby break up, I'll find an excuse to hug him. During that hug, I will whisper in his ear, "Reyn...I like you." Taking a step away, I'll grin, wave, and say, "Bye!" like nothing happened. Then I'll skip off home with butterflies in my stomach, hopeful thoughts.
But...I still don't know if he likes me. Which is why this is so exciting. I like to be out there. I love to take risks. But...Is this too big of a risk? The risk of my pride?
Julie- Number of posts : 29
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Re: The Story Of My Relationship
I like it. I want more since I am sure this is gonna get good...
And, can you read my story called "Closure" in the writing?
Thanks!
And, can you read my story called "Closure" in the writing?
Thanks!
Re: The Story Of My Relationship
That's awesome, Julie. :]
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I can't really updated it until I tell him I like him...Grrr
Julie- Number of posts : 29
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Re: The Story Of My Relationship
Okay Julie. x]
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Okay okay I'm back! I didn't tell him but I have more news.
Chapter Two
[Yes short chapters]
"Hey Abby. How's you and Reyn?" I said to myself as I pressed on the letters of my Helio Ocean [It goes both ways, with a computer keyboard thingy and the number thingy]. I pressed send, and went back to laughing with my friends at Curry House. "Da-da-da-ding!" My phone chirped happily. My friends stared at my phone, knowing I was talking to Reyn's girlfriend.
I gasped, reading the message again. "What?" my friends questioned, leaning in. "I think I'm gonna dump him tomorrow," I read aloud. My best friend Linda snatched the phone out of my hand and almost burst out laughing. "She can't spell anything," she giggled. "It's one of those chat languages," I snapped, grabbing the phone. "Stop snatching my stuff." Linda giggled once more. "Sorry," she held up her hands to exaggerate her innocence.
"Julie, when you whisper to him, you have to send tingles up his spine. You have to make him shiver!" Linda demanded. "Okay, okay," I waved her off, and went back to taking silly pictures with my friends on my cell phone. Linda rolled her eyes. I took a picture. "DELETE IT!" Linda shrieked. "No!" It was my turn to giggle.
The rest of the lunch was spent in laughter.
Chapter Two
[Yes short chapters]
"Hey Abby. How's you and Reyn?" I said to myself as I pressed on the letters of my Helio Ocean [It goes both ways, with a computer keyboard thingy and the number thingy]. I pressed send, and went back to laughing with my friends at Curry House. "Da-da-da-ding!" My phone chirped happily. My friends stared at my phone, knowing I was talking to Reyn's girlfriend.
I gasped, reading the message again. "What?" my friends questioned, leaning in. "I think I'm gonna dump him tomorrow," I read aloud. My best friend Linda snatched the phone out of my hand and almost burst out laughing. "She can't spell anything," she giggled. "It's one of those chat languages," I snapped, grabbing the phone. "Stop snatching my stuff." Linda giggled once more. "Sorry," she held up her hands to exaggerate her innocence.
"Julie, when you whisper to him, you have to send tingles up his spine. You have to make him shiver!" Linda demanded. "Okay, okay," I waved her off, and went back to taking silly pictures with my friends on my cell phone. Linda rolled her eyes. I took a picture. "DELETE IT!" Linda shrieked. "No!" It was my turn to giggle.
The rest of the lunch was spent in laughter.
Julie- Number of posts : 29
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Registration date : 2007-12-07
Re: The Story Of My Relationship
PolarJonas wrote:I like it. I want more since I am sure this is gonna get good...
And, can you read my story called "Closure" in the writing?
Thanks!
i really liked it too
Re: The Story Of My Relationship
Awesome. Update soon, Julie. :]
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"JULIE! Abby broke up with Reyn," Rachel whispered as soon as she saw me. "I know," I slammed my locker shut and locked the lock.
The rest of the day was like a breeze. I watched him from afar, he offered me his lunch since I didn't want to buy, I said no, then tried to steal his lunch, and he slapped my hand away. I started to dance with my friends, imitating a bad dancer grinding.
~*~
After school
"Julie, I called Reyn and told him you really liked him."
The words that made me nervous. The words that would turn my world upside down, probably...But maybe...Maybe my world will become better? Maybe...Maybe...
The rest of the day was like a breeze. I watched him from afar, he offered me his lunch since I didn't want to buy, I said no, then tried to steal his lunch, and he slapped my hand away. I started to dance with my friends, imitating a bad dancer grinding.
~*~
After school
"Julie, I called Reyn and told him you really liked him."
The words that made me nervous. The words that would turn my world upside down, probably...But maybe...Maybe my world will become better? Maybe...Maybe...
Julie- Number of posts : 29
Age : 28
Registration date : 2007-12-07
Re: The Story Of My Relationship
Oh wow.
Update soon.
I wanna see what happens. :]
Update soon.
I wanna see what happens. :]
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